Work on the timing!
You need to build more tension! Also I personally would have had the phone call voice slowly speak instead of 'singing' (I mean leave away the rhythm).
But other than that, it's great!! Really creepy scary shit ^^
Work on the timing!
You need to build more tension! Also I personally would have had the phone call voice slowly speak instead of 'singing' (I mean leave away the rhythm).
But other than that, it's great!! Really creepy scary shit ^^
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